Model de resposta (135 paraules, sense comptar el títol):
Is It Time to Switch Off?
How many times have you checked your phone today? If you are anything like me, the answer is embarrassing. Our devices have become a constant distraction, interrupting lessons, meals and even conversations.
Experts warn that spending too many hours online can damage our well-being, leading to anxiety and poor sleep. Yet it is hard to resist the temptation of one more notification. That is why some of my classmates have decided to cut down on screen time by leaving their phones in a drawer after nine o'clock.
Admittedly, technology is not the enemy: we need it to study, to communicate and to relax. The real challenge is to use it mindfully rather than compulsively.
So this weekend, why not unplug for a few hours? You might be surprised by how much you enjoy the silence.
Lèxic requerit: constant, distraction, well-being, resist, cut down on, mindfully, unplug, compulsively (els vuit elements). Registre semiformal, un ganxo inicial amb pregunta, un matís (Admittedly...) i una crida final.
Criteris: Grammar (present perfect, estructura causal, comparatius), Vocabulary (lèxic requerit integrat amb naturalitat), Cohesion (Yet, That is why, Admittedly, So), Adequacy and coherence (títol, to adequat, opinió i crida).
Errors típics
- Escriure com un essay formal sense apel·lar el lector, o massa col·loquial amb abreviatures.
- Utilitzar el lèxic proposat de manera forçada o incorrecta (unplug per «desendollar» un aparell sense sentit figurat).
- Oblidar la crida a l'acció o el matís.
- Superar el límit de paraules amb una introducció llarga.
Conceptes treballats: article de revista, to semiformal, apel·lació al lector, vocabulari temàtic (tecnologia i benestar), connectors.