Model de resposta (130 paraules):
Banning private cars from city centres is, in my view, a necessary step rather than a radical one. It is the quality of the air we breathe that should concern us most. Rarely do residents of busy streets realise how much pollution they inhale every day, yet the health consequences are well documented.
Critics argue that shops would lose customers. However, experience shows otherwise: what attracts shoppers is a pleasant environment, not a car park. Were pedestrians given more space, cafés and markets would flourish.
Admittedly, some people, such as the elderly, depend on their cars. Under no circumstances should they be left without options, which is why cheap and frequent public transport must come first.
In conclusion, only when cities put people before traffic will they become truly liveable.
Estructures: cleft (It is the quality of the air... that; what attracts shoppers is), inversió (Rarely do residents...; Under no circumstances should they...; only when cities put people before traffic will they...), condicional invertit (Were pedestrians given more space...).
Criteris: Grammar: estructures avançades ben formades. Vocabulary: precisió (inhale, flourish, liveable). Cohesion: paràgrafs, connectors i referències (Critics..., However, Admittedly, In conclusion). Adequacy and coherence: postura clara, contraargument i conclusió, sense fets inventats.
Errors típics
- Forçar totes les estructures avançades en una sola frase, cosa que fa el text artificial.
- Invertir de manera incorrecta: Rarely residents realise... o Were given pedestrians more space.
- No oferir cap contraargument: a la PAU, la gestió d'idees contràries enriqueix la coherència.
- Inventar dades o estadístiques (80% of citizens agree) en lloc d'argumentar amb lògica.
Conceptes treballats: opinion essay, estructura argumentativa, estructures avançades integrades, connectors, criteris de la PAU.