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Teachers and employers frequently complain that young people can no longer hold a proper conversation. Having grown up with smartphones, I disagree with this claim, although I accept that there is some truth in it.
On the one hand, there is evidence for the criticism. A recent study found that teenagers send far more messages than they make calls, and a number of professors have reported that students rarely speak up in seminars. Some psychologists have even warned that constant texting may weaken the ability to read facial expressions.
On the other hand, young people communicate all the time; they simply do it differently. They discuss ideas in group chats, organise events online and meet friends in person just as often as previous generations did. My own classmates, for example, said they preferred talking to texting when the subject was important.
Besides, conversation skills can be taught. Schools could ask pupils to take part in debates and oral presentations, which would help them gain confidence.
In conclusion, I believe young people are not worse communicators, but they do need opportunities to practise in person.
Claus de correcció: (1) opinió clara amb contraargument; (2) ús correcte d'estil indirecte (complain that, reported that, said they preferred); (3) cohesió i connectors.