Model de resposta:
Few people would deny that social media has transformed the way young people communicate. While it offers genuine benefits, I believe its drawbacks currently outweigh them.
On the positive side, platforms allow teenagers to stay in touch with friends who have moved away and to find communities that share their interests, something that would have been impossible a generation ago. Moreover, they have given many young people a voice in public debates.
On the other hand, constant connection has come at a cost. Studies suggest that teenagers who have been spending several hours a day online are more likely to feel anxious and to compare themselves unfavourably with others. In addition, face-to-face conversation, which develops empathy and patience, is gradually being replaced by short messages.
All things considered, I would argue that social media is a useful tool but a poor substitute for real contact. Unless young people learn to use it in moderation, the problems will only grow. Schools and families should therefore teach digital habits just as they teach road safety, so that, by the time today's children become adults, they will have learnt to control the technology rather than be controlled by it.
Claus de correcció: (1) equilibri entre avantatges i inconvenients amb opinió clara; (2) varietat i precisió dels temps verbals; (3) connectors (on the other hand, moreover, all things considered) i paràgrafs ben organitzats.